Just in case, when you read this letter, you get irate because it appears I judged this book on an incomplete reading, I DID finish it. And it didnt get any better. Of course I never received a reply to this letter (and I didnt expect one—was sure, in fact, the editor would be too cowardly) but I doubt a young reader would be treated the same. So, come on, if you dont like a book you have just read, send a letter to the publisher. Of course, you will have to give more detail than the simple statement, “It was boring”. You will need to tell the publisher why it was boring. Publishers will continue fobbing off young people with poorly written books if you dont stop them!
See here for more examples of bad writing in Warriors of Alavna.